That totally works. Also it completely makes sense that you'd want to figure out stuff before posting a start!

Just checking one tiny logistical thing so I don't assume weirdly*: is Diluc just pausing in the doorway, holding the door open as he does, or is he holding the door FOR Cam and noticing Cam behind him in the changing room?

*I don't mind either way or just making it up! I just know I personally get a little thrown when someone writes someone in a position or place or whatever that wasn't how I had been imagining it, so I try to avoid doing it to anyone else on the off chance it's not just my brain being ridiculous.